The Life Of The Shoes...
Their gone, everyone get up! As all the shoes wake up and scatter round the house, "who's hungry" Grey asked "me" shouted everyone. As Grey was making pancakes for breakfast everyone was asking the house a mess! Grey turns around... "What on earth has happened in here!" everyone goes quiet, "Clean it up now before breakfast is ready!!" Grey shouted.
Everyone has finished breakfast and cleaned up their mess. They were all laying on the couch watching their favourite show, Shoe tumblers. White hears a car pull up and moves as quick as he could to the window, he takes a sneaky peek outside of the window "everyone back to your places!" white shouts...
Kia ora Jaz!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story about the shoes. You had some really awesome describing words like scatter and sneaky peek. I like the detail those phrases added to your writing. Next time try including an introduction to let us know what the task was that you were assigned so we know what you are sharing with us!
- Miss Birtch