I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For the last 2 days my Sister and I have been working on a slide it's called Msp house tour its all made up nothing real :) so here is the slide if you have any feedback be sure to comment it:
Kia ora Jasmine (triplet) Sita here... This slide is sooo cool and creative the house is awesome, the characters look cute and the room a FANTASTIC. I like how you showed us everyroom of the the house. I also like how you said who the people are that made the slide. I have a question... Since your sister had a different name did you have a name in the slide that was made up and if so what was that name??? That is all for now. Blog ya later. BYEEEEEE!!!! :) :) :)
Kia ora Jasmine, Mikayla K here, great slide! This is a amazing house, I like the lamborghini, This slide is sooo cool! love it, You could make it a bit longer. Anyways,Bye Bye!
Hi Jasmine the Msp house tour was a great post! the whole car (Lambo) is called lamborghini which is pronounced Lambo-Gity and Lamborghini is how it's spelt. At slide 1, 2, 3, 4, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30 and more slides have speech bubbles that aren't really speech bubbles and it really looks like the person is thinking. BTW (which means by the way) I've never seen a room like that before (at slide 31) A lamborghini has two seats Which means it has to fit 2 people in the car
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Kia ora Jasmine (triplet) Sita here...
ReplyDeleteThis slide is sooo cool and creative the house is awesome, the characters look cute and the room a FANTASTIC. I like how you showed us everyroom of the the house. I also like how you said who the people are that made the slide.
I have a question...
Since your sister had a different name did you have a name in the slide that was made up and if so what was that name???
That is all for now.
Blog ya later.
BYEEEEEE!!!! :) :) :)
Kia ora Jasmine, Mikayla K here, great slide!
ReplyDeleteThis is a amazing house, I like the lamborghini, This slide is sooo cool! love it, You could make it a bit longer.
Anyways,Bye Bye!
Hi Jasmine the Msp house tour was a great post! the whole car (Lambo) is called lamborghini which is pronounced Lambo-Gity and Lamborghini is how it's spelt. At slide 1, 2, 3, 4, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30 and more slides have speech bubbles that aren't really speech bubbles and it really looks like
ReplyDeletethe person is thinking.
BTW (which means by the way)
I've never seen a room like that before
(at slide 31)
A lamborghini has two seats
Which means it has to fit 2 people in the car
Hey Jasmine, Nirvana here great work!
ReplyDeletethis house is AMAZING.
I love it so much I won't a house like that.
I think more