Port hills fire

Port Hills Fire - Recount

Kia ora and welcome to my blog today I am sharing my Port Hills Fire Recount. The purpose of my writing today is to entertain people with my writing.

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                                                                                               This is the fire now

When my mum and I were in the mall getting the shopping done for school , My mums phone went off “ding ding” I checked it for her it said “ Go have a look outside and look at the sky it looks like a fire” mum said come on then we will hurry to have a look . We had finally finished we packed the stuff and then there it was black smoke and red hot burning blaze ahead from where i was standing. We jumped into the car and and went the long way home to have a look on the way we seen redness around the smoke, I felt really sorry for the people who lived there.

We got home and my sisters did not even let me and mum get inside they were like did you see the fire. I replied “ yes help get the shopping inside”. While we were getting the shopping in, the news started I ran in there and paused it so we could listen and watch it so see what was going on.

After the news was finished the girls went to bed while I was cleaning the backyard, I was cleaning the back yard so that Mum could mow the lawns and put the sprinkler out on the grass. We did not want to out grass to light on fire because of how DRY  our grass was. I had done the lawns and then went inside to watch tv. After one program we went outside and had a look it still looked the same, so we went back inside and watched the other 2 programs. After that it was 9:00pm I went out and had a look it looked like the sky was changing color. Wow I said I had never seen something so crazy. I got into my pjs and set off to bed.

It was the next day I had jump out of bed and ran to the back door to see if the fire had been put out or if it was still burning had a feeling it was still burning and it was :(. I had gone to school and everyone could see it on the field. A week later… The fire had been put it yay what a relief but the people who lived in the port hills was still not aloud to go into their homes.

That is my writing for now. Do you think that my story was entertain or not? What do you think would make my story sound better.