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Wednesday, February 1, 2017

Story time

The Day Tom Starts School 

Once upon a time there lived a little boy called tom he lives with his parents and his 2 year old sister. It was the 2cd of february and it was the day he started school he was really existed he was bouncing around he had his breakfast and got his bag and went to the bus  stop with his mum and his sister Naomi. They got to the bus stop and he jumped on the bus and gave the bus driver sally a big smile. He sat next to Timmy his best friend and said bye to Mum. He arrived a school jumped off the bus and fell over, they called his mum and his mum came straight away. She took him to the doctors and he had broken his left leg he got a cast put on it and then he got to go back to school he was in crushers he was really wobbly on them so he got a wheelchair then he wheeled into the class his class was really surprised. He started felling sore so he went home and then he had a ice-cream on the way home. He got home and then he stared felling good again. 

The end of the story this is just a story I made in my head.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Jasmin, Safiyya here amazing story I was wondering if you could use more detail please also could you write more Ka kite ano!

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  2. Hi Jasmine it is lacie here it was a great story but maybe next time add what he did at home and if it was hard for him to get to sleep here is a quick question how long did it take you to make this?

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