I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Jasmine! Hannah.O here,
ReplyDeleteThat was an amazing story!!
What breed was the dog? Was it cute?
Blog ya later!
Hey Jasmine its TJ nice work I love writing its awesome fantastic job
ReplyDeleteyou have a awesome day at school.
Hi Jasmine Emily here.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story. Love it. it is one of your best story yet.
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